Wednesday, 4 April 2012

A Guest Post With Poems

Hey guys I'm sorry to do this to you a day after having original content at least, and seemingly being back on the wagon, but I have a lot of problems right now which include having three emotional breakdowns in a week. I'm a real damn mess and so I'm just going to have to hand over the reins today to someone you may remember, Kbbuddingwriter. He wrote a short story for me before and this time he's back with some poetry for me, which I'm going to share with you. Enjoy!
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"I open my eyes,
and I see darkness;
is this the day,
that'll be my last?
I don't know 'bout
that for sure;
all I know is
after three comes four."

"Beneath this stupid,
crooked smile,
lays and animal,
cold and vile,
His anger's so huge,
I think he's from hell;
but all I know is
after K comes L."

"Beneath me was
this kid I knew,
if he's still there,
I have no clue.
His laugh scares,
his joy defies my theory of
life so much that I'm afraid,
how the hell is he
really a part of me?

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Hmmm, reminds me of my poem about the beast within.

27 comments:

  1. Great poem. And don't knock yourself when you are having a rough time...trust me...I know!!

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  2. Are you serious? 3 in a week and it's barely Wednesday.

    You going to be alright? What's going on? o_o

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    1. By in the past week I meant in the past seven days, I had one on Thursday (in a driving lesson) and one on either Friday or Saturday, and then one again yesterday. I'll be fine eventually.

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  3. THIS IS A SHIT POEM, THIS IS A SHIT POET, AND HE SHOULD GO BACK TO WRITING SHIT STORIES, OR ELSE HE SHOULD GO SCREW HIMSELF! THE BLOGOVERSE DESERVES BETTER THAN THIS BULLCRAP!

    No, I'm 1000% serious.

    (No typos anywhere)

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    1. *KBBUDDINGWRITER IS A SHIT POET

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    2. Nah you're a great poet, no shitting on yourself allowed. Keep waiting to see how everyone else reacts.

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    3. Oh my goodness. Both of you guys sound like you seriously need a hug.

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    4. We always are our own worst critics. :P

      -Barb the French Bean

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  4. Mate I'm really sorry to hear you've had a few breakdowns. Life's being a dick to me right now so it hurts to hear I'm not the only one. Hope things are better soon, I loved the poem too by the way.

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  5. I am really worried about you. I hope everything is okay over there. If it makes you feel better, I had a few minor nervous breakdowns before I got well and happy. Funny thing is, some of my friends hate happy me, but that's because they are miserable.

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    1. Well the only person who I consider a true friend does want me to be happy. She's gone crazy before about how people have hurt me.

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  6. yeah i dont know what it is, poems dont do anything for me. heres on that has been seen all over youtube.

    roses are tits.
    violets are tits.
    i like tits.
    tits.

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  7. That's a really good poem.

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  8. I hope you feel better, Mark. Remember to just take it one day at a time.

    -Barb the French Bean

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  9. Dude do you really not want to talk about this or something? I feel pretty stupid for just sitting here watching you getting all depressed and shit. But guess if you wanted to you knew where to find me, so I don't know why I'm even bothering asking again.
    Just, worried about you I guess. Keep your heads up, even if it's just for me and the possibility we may meet up some day?

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    1. Don't feel stupid. I'm not really all that good at talking about things with anyone. I can only do it with Jessica because we're just that close. It's sweet of you to keep asking, so keep it up :) I'm going to hold up okay.

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  10. I think we're all concerned for you Mark. I've been hanging on by a thread myself but I know there will be relief because I'm going home tomorrow. I don't know what to say that would help you.

    The poem does remind me of yours, but I think this is a universal theme and we've all experienced it. Nice job K.

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    1. I'll get by, enjoy going home :)

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  11. Sorry to hear you're not feeling too good, I hope things brighten up soon. Really good poem!

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  12. Sorry to hear a bout the breakdowns. Hope things are getting better! Altho sometimes you do need to hit rock bottom to really make some big steps back up...

    I thoroughly enjoyed your tv review with Bersercules. Good stuff. :D

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  13. "Beneath me was
    this kid I knew,
    if he's still there,
    I have no clue.

    Very powerful and moving. And relatable.

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  14. Sorry things aren't going so great. Though I'm glad you have this outlet at least.

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  15. Mark, I'm getting seriously worried about you that I'm kind of having a melt-down myself!
    Gosh, I hope that you will realise that these things WILL pass. No one said that life is full of roses, but there is hope for us all.

    One day I will write my story, and you will see that the light at the end of the tunnel is NOT a truck coming straight at you.
    Keep your chin up.

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    1. I'll be fine, try not to worry so much. It's not a truck that's coming to hit me it's a train.

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  16. Great post Kbbuddingwriter!
    ...and Mark from personal experience these things are often better when you talk to someone about what's going on...and often it's easier to talk to a complete stranger. Hope things get better soon...but I think we're all here for you.

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